Structured Commenting
Protocol
When you comment on your peers’
drafts this semester, please follow these steps:
1. Read the essay through once,
without marking it. It can be helpful to take a few notes while you read.
2. After you’ve done this,
identify the two or three most important “higher order” things you think your
peer needs could improve.
[Note: “higher order”
concerns may include aspects of course content, conceptual understanding,
argument, complexity, analysis, use of evidence, development of ideas,
organization, understanding of audience, and sometimes diction and tone.]
3. Construct a head comment—a
comment that you will paste at the beginning of your peer’s paper—that does the
following: 1) offers a brief but specific description of general strengths, and
2) explains the two or three things to work on in a way that frames your
remarks in terms of techniques and strategies to improve for subsequent drafts
and assignments (e.g., “you’ve done an excellent job of…, but two central
things to continue to work on are…”). This comment will probably be fairly
detailed in presenting and discussing these two or three focus areas. It may be
helpful to think of this head comment as a kind of “roadmap” to the marginal comments
you will insert.
4. Finally, go back through the
paper and, writing in full sentences, insert selective marginal comments and/or
praise to reinforce and exemplify your head comment (e.g., “This point is
unclear because…” or “You do a nice job here of…”). Give explanation and/or
examples when you note both areas to improve and areas of strength.
It’s fine if the marginal
comments reiterate points made in the head comment; indeed, they might
specifically reference a moment in the head comment as a way of reinforcing it
(“As I noted in my opening comment, here is a place where…”). Since your head
comment will be fairly detailed, you will probably need relatively fewer
marginal comments to highlight the relevant examples.
5. If you wish, additionally, to
comment on “lower order” concerns (e.g., style, grammar, and/or punctuation),
please focus on just one or two patterns encountered throughout the essay,
explain these in a separate paragraph of your head comment, and mark up only a
single representative paragraph in the essay to model corrections.
